Mar 22 2008
i need an introductionfor my essay on cleanliness and relaxation?
jennie_12546 asked:
okay, so i have the body of my essay already written, the main theme being relaxation and cleanliness. i have one paragraph on people finding relaxation in cleaning, one one relaxation and family, one on relaxation and cleanliness with the body, and two other pointless paragraphs. basically the whole essay is on relaxing and cleanliness and how they affect each other. i need an introduction. i am having much trouble writing it. i want to start it with cleanliness is next to godliness please help!!!!!!!
okay, so i have the body of my essay already written, the main theme being relaxation and cleanliness. i have one paragraph on people finding relaxation in cleaning, one one relaxation and family, one on relaxation and cleanliness with the body, and two other pointless paragraphs. basically the whole essay is on relaxing and cleanliness and how they affect each other. i need an introduction. i am having much trouble writing it. i want to start it with cleanliness is next to godliness please help!!!!!!!
One Response to “i need an introductionfor my essay on cleanliness and relaxation?”
Well the idea of an intro is to catch readers attention by introducing your paper by paragraph in order. For example, if my paper’s 1st para talked about how people relax by cleaning, my 2nd talked about people who relax by being around their family, 3rd talked about how most people enjoy being clean to relax, and so on, my introduction would start. There are many ways to relax and enjoy days when you have a day off, but people’s motives for relaxing and cleanliness can vary. Some people clean to relax, other people relax when they are with their families, and most people need to feel clean while they are relaxing. No matter what your preference is, the most important thing is that you are happy, relaxed and clean.
Then make sure each para starts off with a corresponding topic sentence. Such as for the 1st sentence. Believe it or not, some people find cleaning to be relaxing due to……. blah blah blah.
On a side note, I would not put cleanliness is next to godliness unless you plan on addressing that in the paper, or maybe as an opening line, saying, many years ago, people said cleanliness was next to godliness and then something pertaining to cleaning in your paper. You may be able to work it in your conclusion. Which should be similar to your intro, but summarizing the main points.